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Warrior - Larp

Warrior - Larp

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Rafael Bienia

Rafael Bienia


Free Account, Aschaffenburg

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  • Patrick B. Parenteau

    Patrick B. Parenteau 16/10/2006 21:29

    Good sharpness, but the composition is both lacking in information and is too busy in the background. Changing your point of view, if possible, to show more detail in your main subject and to remove other people from the image would have improved the shot.
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  • MWPhoto

    MWPhoto 11/10/2006 23:07

    There is a second figure in the image, and it is OK for that one to be unfocused, but not OK to be hidden by the staff. Do you have any other compositions of this subject?
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  • Alexandra Baltog

    Alexandra Baltog 11/10/2006 16:20

    I think the expression of his face is almost determination, will-power ...
    anyway, this is a good portrait...
    regards, A.
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  • Robert Riley

    Robert Riley 10/10/2006 23:30

    I have to agree with Tom, Warrior is not there! It is a good picture, but the title is very important!

    I would call him; 'The Flag Carrier'

    There is absolutely no Warrior in hid face.
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  • Igor Flasz

    Igor Flasz 10/10/2006 17:28

    Great colors, very sharp, nice face..
    Igor
    SUNSET IN TURKIA
    SUNSET IN TURKIA
     Igor Flasz

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  • Tom McDade

    Tom McDade 10/10/2006 14:15

    I can't see the 'worrior' because there's not enough of him and I would have to rely on imagination to see what you saw. I can see the effect you were going for, but don't forget you were there you saw the whole thing I don't know where you were or who he is. Good shot, though of this man and great colours but I need more info to relate to your title.
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