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Bitte schreiben Sie mir ihren Eindruck. Was ist nicht gut, was kann man wie besser machen?
Please write something about your impression of this picture. What is not good, what can I do better?

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Natur RB 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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Luca Di Muzio 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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Valfoto 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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claudine capello 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
pro++++++++++
Alamos 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
Thank you
Silvana W. 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
Completely agree with Ken......regards
Der Zacki 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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Bernd Schmidt2 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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Alamos 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
Thank you very much for your comment....I know that I am not good in photographie (and English) but I learn....one way to learn are the comments like yours. Thank you
Ken Piros 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
Flower images to make the gallery really have to have a tight control of sharpness and blurred DOF. In this image the DOF is controlled nicely and the blurred background allows the main focal point to be on the flower as it should. The issue is that the flower is not very sharp.

I went to your homepage and looked at the EXIF data on this shot and what I have learned the hard way from some of my mistakes is that even though your lens has f2.8 capabilities and will give you that nice smooth blurred background it can be hard to control the sharpness of the main subject. It seems like the top pedal here has some sharpness to it but the flower center and surrounding pedals are blurry, changing your f stop from f2.8 to f4 will allow the flower to be sharper throughtout and still give you a good blur in the background.

Now it also depends on your intent, which I could not get from your EXIF data, if you only wanted part of the flower to be sharp and the rest blurry like the background then you should have focused on the center of the flower and had that sharp and all the surrounding pedals blurry.

You have the concept down very well you just need to refine it a little.

Hope this helps.
Bernard.Backpacker 16/02/2013 11:10 Commento di voto
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Anita Jarzombek-Krauledies 31/01/2013 22:06
Aus einer sehr guten Perspektive festgehalten. Klasse ist auch der Schärfeverlauf!
Viele Grüße Anita
Metti mi piace
Alamos 19/01/2013 14:26
Thank you
Metti mi piace