direcciòn
dieses bild entstand an dem tag, als ich zum letzten mal in der stabi war, um fürs abi zu lernen...daher auch der titel...irgendwie mag ichs, aber irgendwas stört mich auch daran...bin mir aber nicht sicher, worans liegt..
Commenti
3
Informazioni
| Sezione | Youth: Experimental |
| Visto da | 1.114 |
| Pubblicato | |
| Lingua |
|
| Licenza |
Alexander Koning 21/07/2005 20:01
What's bothering me is that it really looks like a "lucky shot". It's taken under little light situation and has bewegungs unschearfe, a great element of photography, but it has no direst function in your picture. What I see here is an effect study, and not a stand alone photograph. But otherwise I think you got an eye for balanced composition and colour, wich is a good start.Martin Unger 20/07/2005 17:54
Hi Doro! You have captured an interesting effect here, but as you say I think there is the possibility to improve it. At first, try another crop. In my opinion the motif is too much centered which gives a little boring (sorry) impression. Maybe also remove some of the steps on the ground. I'm not sure if some work with contrasts or colors would improve the picture, but it could be worth a try... OK, much critisizing, but you really got an interesting shot you can use for creating a really good picture from!Greetings, Martin
Doro G 20/07/2005 16:44
49 clicks und kein anmerk...bitte bitte kritisiert...