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Feeling heavy

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Robyn Raggio 01/01/2007 22:45
The composition had promise, with the exception of that branch. The swirling branches at the top snag the eye and lead it gently around the image on the right margin, but that branch brusquely grabs the viewer's eye and jettisons it right off the left margin. Perhaps a few step to the right would have helped gel the components to keep the eye firmly in the image. The exposure, water textures, crunch of the snow and control of the whites is very well done.
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Galina Zastava 07/12/2006 10:40
Colors on the top are wonderful. It seems I can feel freshness of a frosty day :)
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Irina Pidova 01/12/2006 16:06
Yes, without the pipe it becomes a winter fairy-tale!!!!!!

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Massimo Carolla 28/11/2006 19:06
as Tom say.......good shot now, with some more experience will be excellent, ciao Massimo
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Tom McDade 28/11/2006 14:17
This photo has alot of potential but will need to be cropped. The 'pipe'/log in the bottom leading off to the left needs to come out. the colours in the top half of the photo are stunning and need to be made better use of. the heavy branch and reflection should be your focal point. have a play and see what cropping will suit the photo best.
Regards
Tom
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Sezione	Subjects: Critique - straight and tough
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