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In Stimmung - in welcher nur?

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Arthur Krier 17/09/2016 11:26
Dear Robert,
thank you so much for you comment and critics. I really appreciate this and wish to have loads more of this kind of exchange in the community!

First the one thing I completely agree with you: it is the watch. When I saw the picture on my computer screen at home this was the first thing that jumped into my eye - which is a bad indicator already.
Concerning the light situation: this is one thing I found exciting about this location (that we just passed so actually this is more like a snap than a real shooting). Maybe you explain best why I found it exciting: because it is unusual for our eyes to have the change from bright to dark go from top left to right down. So this is really one thing I wanted to have like this. I might agree on taking down the hard difference and take down brightness of the left top corner a bit. But generally this is a thing I want to have here. Still I understand you saying that it feels unusual.

Thank you again Robert and cheers
Arthur
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Arthur Krier 17/09/2016 11:16
Danke dir metalfrog!
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Robert G. Mueller 13/09/2016 1:00
Dear Arthur, i am looking at a nice picture and i can read your intention for this portrait. The light mood has been mentioned by another member and this is exactly what i am not agree at all. Look at the all over light situation and try to follow me. The background is very bright and it is in the left upper and as our eyes reading from the left to the right it feels unusual that at the right i find your main subject which is very dark. There are one more thing which distracts from her beauty and this is her watch. In portraits like the shown one its better to reduce jewelry or others in order to focus more on the main subject. The trick is an easy one to change the image while using just a small speed light in iTTL or an light bouncer like a reflectore. Reading the DOF chart of the 50mm prime the soft background can be achieved even with a higher f-stop. All over a good picture with a nice intention but at the end its an unused potential.
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Martin Schönheit 12/09/2016 23:25
super Ausdrucksweise, sehr schön festgehalten
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Arthur Krier 12/09/2016 22:45
Hey Jupp, vielen Dank für deinen Kommentar. Es freut mich sehr, wenn du die Lichtstimmung gut zum Ausdruck des Models und der Szene passend findest :)

Viele Grüße
Arthur
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Sezione	Menschen
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Pubblicato	12/09/2016
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Fotocamera	NIKON D810
Obiettivo	50.0 mm f/1.4
Diaframma	2.8
Tempo di esposizione	1/60
Distanza focale	50.0 mm
ISO	800

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