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Chris Stevens

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Temptress

one of a series of photos i will be posting....thought i'd dabble in a little glamour photography - feedback gratefully accepted!

Liz M 19/04/2006 8:15
Hi
This is a lovely photo, the expression is really good i would maybe just make the light on her face more subtle and make the background more formal, because you can see that she is wearing a striped jumper which makes the photo less seductive or maybe make the background dark. Also there is abit of redness in the photo, maybe if you reduce that it might make the photo look more natural. Those are just a few of my suggestions, hope you like them.
Liz
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Jaime Crystal Attenborough 14/09/2005 14:24
i think its perfect, love the light shining in her eye, it is very seductive, lovely colours also

jaime :)
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Robert Riley 06/09/2005 22:19
I hope I did not insult your model, but I really believe that you could make a better shot of this. She is is obviously a temptress. What do you think.

Respect.
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John Davis 04/09/2005 6:49
There's a twinkle in that almost evil looking eye... I love it just the way it is. It has charm!
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Felix Kröner 04/09/2005 6:23
I like the hair the way it is and not only the hair ;)
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Jeremy B 04/09/2005 5:42
The model has an attractive face, and you've posed her well. I think you could crop some of the right hand side just a little.
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Robert Riley 04/09/2005 1:09
OK Chris,

This shot is good, But to me it could be really good. Your model has great lips and eyes, but I can't help but think that she should have washed her hair.
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